Abdul Wahab


My Love (An Ode) - Poem by Abdul Wahab

I love my love
As love should love
But you never love
As my love should love me.

yougot yourcolourful wings
and youfly
but I am never invited
left asa flower without butterfly


You are the wish
You are the desire
Every one loves to fill with
But my heart pangs in despair.

Even if Iclose my eyes and shut my mind
My heart knows you comein as a rain
In the hearts of people but mine I find
In the desert under unbearable wreathing pain.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about My Love (An Ode) by Abdul Wahab

  • Sylvaonyema Uba (4/17/2018 8:40:00 AM)

    You are he wish
    You are the desire
    Everyone loves to fill with...

    Good use of quatrain for stanzaic and stylistic effects.

    SylvaOnyema Uba
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  • Mohit Katyal (8/1/2017 7:39:00 AM)

    short and sweeet.. its nice (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/3/2016 2:22:00 PM)

    Love is the key about life; and love is all that we need. Nice work. (Report)Reply

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  • Phanice Wamukota (6/21/2015 4:02:00 AM)

    Mmmmmmh, and I love this piece. (Report)Reply

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  • Thomas Vaughan Jones (1/19/2014 8:50:00 AM)

    Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve.
    Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door.
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  • (1/17/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    very nice............. (Report)Reply

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  • Ruby Mostazir (12/31/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    So emotional...........i love thissSsss (Report)Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (12/31/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    thank you all very much...i appreciate whatever you all say evaluating this piece of love poem.. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    Helloy!
    like
    I, too, so I can
    Write, compose together.
    ****************************
    His a love...
    his a love...
    your name is love
    find love you
    find love you
    lose you
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  • Soumita Sarkar (12/22/2013 11:43:00 PM)

    love speaking...running....walking with ease in all the hearts alike................... (Report)Reply

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  • Blest Vividly (9/3/2013 2:21:00 AM)

    heya.. Very good one.. God bless you (Report)Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (7/25/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    thank you John Kim for lovely comment.. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/25/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/25/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love. (Report)Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (7/24/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    thank you very much for comments Maryam Siddique (Report)Reply

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  • (7/14/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    But you never love as my love should love me - being a venus in cancer and mars in scorpio I always feel my love never loves me as my love should (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/11/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    in your poem you are saying you love more than the other person loves you. this is unfair love. I love the thought here. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/20/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    Just down into the core of love just luvli! ...regards (Report)Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (6/10/2013 4:43:00 AM)

    the poem has been edited.... (Report)Reply

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  • Shahzia Batool (3/28/2012 8:51:00 AM)

    The last ten lines are really beautiful... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 13, 2018


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