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My Love (An Ode)

Rating: 3.8

I love my love
As love should love
But you never love
As my love should love me.

yougot yourcolourful wings
and youfly
but I am never invited
left asa flower without butterfly

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Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Kim 25 July 2013

Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

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John Kim 25 July 2013

Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

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Blest Vividly 03 September 2013

heya.. Very good one.. God bless you

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Wahab Abdul 25 July 2013

thank you John Kim for lovely comment..

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Ken E Hall 20 June 2013

Just down into the core of love just luvli! ...regards

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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 April 2018

You are he wish You are the desire Everyone loves to fill with... Good use of quatrain for stanzaic and stylistic effects. SylvaOnyema Uba

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Mohit Katyal 01 August 2017

short and sweeet.. its nice

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

Love is the key about life; and love is all that we need. Nice work.

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Phanice Wamukota 21 June 2015

Mmmmmmh, and I love this piece.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 19 January 2014

Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve. Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door.

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