Abdul Wahab

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My Love (An Ode)

I love my love
As love should love
But you never love
As my love should love me.

yougot yourcolourful wings
and youfly
but I am never invited
left asa flower without butterfly


You are the wish
You are the desire
Every one loves to fill with
But my heart pangs in despair.

Even if Iclose my eyes and shut my mind
My heart knows you comein as a rain
In the hearts of people but mine I find
In the desert under unbearable wreathing pain.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Poem Edited: Sunday, May 13, 2018

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Comments about My Love (An Ode) by Abdul Wahab

  • Sylvaonyema UbaSylvaonyema Uba (4/17/2018 8:40:00 AM)

    You are he wish
    You are the desire
    Everyone loves to fill with...

    Good use of quatrain for stanzaic and stylistic effects.

    SylvaOnyema Uba

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  • Mohit KatyalMohit Katyal (8/1/2017 7:39:00 AM)

    short and sweeet.. its nice

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (1/3/2016 2:22:00 PM)

    Love is the key about life; and love is all that we need. Nice work.

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  • Phanice WamukotaPhanice Wamukota (6/21/2015 4:02:00 AM)

    Mmmmmmh, and I love this piece.

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  • Thomas Vaughan JonesThomas Vaughan Jones (1/19/2014 8:50:00 AM)

    Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve.
    Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door.

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  • Bilal Pandith (1/17/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    very nice.............

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  • Ruby MostazirRuby Mostazir (12/31/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    So emotional...........i love thissSsss

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  • Wahab AbdulWahab Abdul (12/31/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    thank you all very much...i appreciate whatever you all say evaluating this piece of love poem..

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  • Red Yes (12/29/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    Helloy!
    like
    I, too, so I can
    Write, compose together.
    ****************************
    His a love...
    his a love...
    your name is love
    find love you
    find love you
    lose you

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  • Soumita SarkarSoumita Sarkar (12/22/2013 11:43:00 PM)

    love speaking...running....walking with ease in all the hearts alike...................

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  • Blest VividlyBlest Vividly (9/3/2013 2:21:00 AM)

    heya.. Very good one.. God bless you

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  • Wahab AbdulWahab Abdul (7/25/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    thank you John Kim for lovely comment..

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  • John Kim (7/25/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

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  • John Kim (7/25/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

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  • Wahab AbdulWahab Abdul (7/24/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    thank you very much for comments Maryam Siddique

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  • Maryam Siddique (7/14/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    But you never love as my love should love me - being a venus in cancer and mars in scorpio I always feel my love never loves me as my love should

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (7/11/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    in your poem you are saying you love more than the other person loves you. this is unfair love. I love the thought here.

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  • Ken E Hall (6/20/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    Just down into the core of love just luvli! ...regards

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  • Wahab AbdulWahab Abdul (6/10/2013 4:43:00 AM)

    the poem has been edited....

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  • Shahzia BatoolShahzia Batool (3/28/2012 8:51:00 AM)

    The last ten lines are really beautiful...

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