My Love (An Ode) Poem by Abdul Wahab

My Love (An Ode)

Rating: 3.8


I love my love
As love should love
But you never love
As my love should love me.

yougot yourcolourful wings
and youfly
but I am never invited
left asa flower without butterfly


You are the wish
You are the desire
Every one loves to fill with
But my heart pangs in despair.

Even if Iclose my eyes and shut my mind
My heart knows you comein as a rain
In the hearts of people but mine I find
In the desert under unbearable wreathing pain.

Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Kim 25 July 2013

Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

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John Kim 25 July 2013

Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

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Wahab Abdul 25 July 2013

thank you John Kim for lovely comment..

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Blest Vividly 03 September 2013

heya.. Very good one.. God bless you

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Ken E Hall 20 June 2013

Just down into the core of love just luvli! ...regards

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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 April 2018

You are he wish You are the desire Everyone loves to fill with... Good use of quatrain for stanzaic and stylistic effects. SylvaOnyema Uba

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Mohit Katyal 01 August 2017

short and sweeet.. its nice

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

Love is the key about life; and love is all that we need. Nice work.

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Phanice Wamukota 21 June 2015

Mmmmmmh, and I love this piece.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 19 January 2014

Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve. Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door.

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