My Love (An Ode) Poem by Abdul Wahab
My Love (An Ode)
I love my love
As love should love
But you never love
As my love should love me.
yougot yourcolourful wings
and youfly
but I am never invited
left asa flower without butterfly
You are the wish
You are the desire
Every one loves to fill with
But my heart pangs in despair.
Even if Iclose my eyes and shut my mind
My heart knows you comein as a rain
In the hearts of people but mine I find
In the desert under unbearable wreathing pain.
Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.
You are he wish You are the desire Everyone loves to fill with... Good use of quatrain for stanzaic and stylistic effects. SylvaOnyema Uba
Love is the key about life; and love is all that we need. Nice work.
Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve. Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.