Fadwa Daddou Gmiden


Raven - Poem by Fadwa Daddou Gmiden

If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

All what it left inside
It's pain and hurts
It closed the doors
leaving you behind

I can hear the screams at night
I can see the bleeding hearts

If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

Nothing but ashes were found
Nothing but dried blood on the rocks
Nothing but the broken look in the eyes
Nothing but the fugitive love

I can see the crawling
I can hear the whoop of the crow
The sun has gone
The night falls

If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

And through the doors of time
You shall escape
Through the light of hope
You shall escape

I drowned inside this place
But you shall run from here


Comments about Raven by Fadwa Daddou Gmiden

  • Alafe Ramat (6/24/2012 9:53:00 AM)


    Beautifuly expresd and wel brushed, a sad poignant write, wel done: -) (Report) Reply

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  • (5/25/2012 11:02:00 AM)


    this is very dark, though very descriptive. it's sad, but it paints a picture and there is a glimmer of hope at the end. (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/24/2012 4:36:00 PM)


    a nice foot stepping into poe's shoes

    it is scary for sure...nice effect

    be happy
    sat
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  • Jr Cuyam (5/24/2012 11:27:00 AM)


    Wow! i like the way you express pains and hurts and everything that's inside of us... through the doors of time
    You shall escape
    Through the light of hope
    You shall escape. we can escape from everything that blinds and weaken us..thanks to Jesus Christ
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 24, 2012



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