If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by
All what it left inside
It's pain and hurts
It closed the doors
leaving you behind
I can hear the screams at night
I can see the bleeding hearts
If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by
Nothing but ashes were found
Nothing but dried blood on the rocks
Nothing but the broken look in the eyes
Nothing but the fugitive love
I can see the crawling
I can hear the whoop of the crow
The sun has gone
The night falls
If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by
And through the doors of time
You shall escape
Through the light of hope
You shall escape
I drowned inside this place
But you shall run from here
this is very dark, though very descriptive. it's sad, but it paints a picture and there is a glimmer of hope at the end.
a nice foot stepping into poe's shoes it is scary for sure...nice effect be happy sat
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifuly expresd and wel brushed, a sad poignant write, wel done: -)