Chiloola Chilia (Mali ;)
To:
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Date Time:
1/4/2017 9: 40: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject:
Re: Re: Ottaka Vaaru
you ARE THE MOST IDIOTIC POET I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE...STUPID THEMES (YOU SAY YES AND YOU SAY NO AT THE SAME TIME..YOU ARE A HYPOCRITE) , AND YOUR 'POEMS' ARE FULL OF GRAMMAR AND SPELLING MISTAKES. OLD FOOL, GO AND START A PIG FARM..IT WILL BE BETTER FOR YOU TO HAVE PIGS AROUND YOU BECAUSE YOU YOURSELF ARE A PIG. USELESS FELLOW.
YOU MAKE A MOCKERY OUT OF YOUR OWN 'POETRY' (AND OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE) BY MAKING GRAMMAR AND SPELLING MISTAKES EVEN A CHILD CAN CORRECT. YOU ARE ……………..A FU…..FOOLISH OLD FOOL, THAT'S WHAT YOU ARE.
JUST MAKING ME THINK THAT YOU ARE THE OFFSPRING OF A SOMALIAN IN THE DEEP JUNGLES OF AFRICA.
KELUDU KELUDU PATTI POORU KELEVAN.
FROM YOUR DEAR FRIEND IN MALI
HEHEHEHEEHEHEHEHEHEHE
Reader garlands
With his own hand
I have not come across such language
That smells full of praises on page
I shall have no grudges
As poets have an edge
They write in their own way
Create impression and permanently stay
It is like attempting at sun
Throw dust to block a run
The man doesn't know that it shall fall back into his eyes
Even if hardest way he tries
I have not know him personally
Neither have I anything against
Nor any special interest
I write with capacity with acceptable test
I love the way tirade is made known
I have nothing to express of my own
If you are real poet or trying to come on
Please don't make laughing stock before you are thrown out
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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