Real Anchor Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Real Anchor

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Life can bring living hell
If you do not synchronize well
You may call yourself master of destiny
But then also depends on the wishes of almighty

Whether you believe or not
The path is certainly fought
For the betterment of life and future
But nobody can guarantee or assure

You may be good pair
And equally doing fair
But honor and pride is of great value
You must certainly give look and view

Doubts have no place in peaceful way
That may detract and drag you away
You goal may speak of different direction
You shall then offer unrelated action

This amounts drifting away of boat
That is nicely afloat
Your simply co-passengers
Obliged to carry on as good managers

Whether you are learned or ordinary
It is very much necessary
The wife or husband is real anchor
Where lies the responsibility of a leader

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Life can bring living hell If you do not synchronize well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

ok M. Smith5 minutes ago AN ok poem for me......very choppy and not a smooth read for the reader. Good thoughts and material here just needs to be smoother and more crisp rhyme scheme, in my humble opinion. Thanks for sharing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Good Helvi Salminen2 minutes ago Like a guidebook for life. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

welcome rohani daud 1 min · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Les Bush Poet likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Gajanan Mishra 21 April 2014

really a great write sir. I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

anchors are what the ship needs to stay in place in the middle of a raging sea of destiny! Richard Stephan4 minutes ago Life and the reason for being alive need analysis and evaluation, to come to the responsible point of view of the sailor at raging sea without a lifeboat and only one paddle! Great poem Hasmukh Mehta...you hit the nail on the head.....wives and husbands are in deep and must lead themselves out of the darkness! Let the light shine! ; -) Rico Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Excellent Piusha Singh7 minutes ago Excellent write Hasmukh ji, well said I belong to him as he resides in me and me in him.

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