Real Friends

Rating: 5.0

So is the life in waiting
In between remains setting
Promises to keep
Before everything you go for sleep

Birthdays and death days
All are destined in our way
What do we do then?
If not decide today, when?

Long way to go
But what to carry with and what to forgo
What is the ambition?
And what is the mission

Never think you are an ordinary?
Life is must and necessary
It is just medium
Act more pretend minimum

Start from the stretch
Act fast to catch
The first opportunity
To prove your capability

You may have
If responsibly behave
Nothing is impossible
Against resolute struggle

Love to live
Strongly believe
In your own hands
They are real friends

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

More Post Ture Maxie Sutton2 hours ago Well said, like the flow, honest Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2012

So is the life in waiting In between remains setting Promises to keep Before everything you go for sleep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Re: Real friends (Score: 1) by TygerTyger on Thursday, September 06,2012 (13: 51: 35) So true well written. A great piece. A 10 and a heart. thanks for sharing. Pete.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Bruno2 hours ago Nice!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Jordan Goodwin1 hour ago some parts i felt were off Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Ryan Stephans1 hour ago Nice, but kinda hard to follow Comment +1 i like in all

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Barbara Cadogan1 hour ago Enjoyed reading. Comment +1 Good

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