Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Rebirth Of A Dream! Comments

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You rose, leaving aside his wary thoughts!
To teach me to dream, Oh Master-
Filling my vessels with worth invisible,
And dashed hopes rekindle, with thunder.
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Deb Panda
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Ramesh Rai 21 September 2014

For whom does the wind sing, in tune? Oh Master! Songs of his heart resounding In hamlets, fields lonely adventure- firm Youthful lyrics, longing- generations passing. Like fire pillar has no end height of poetry can not be touched. but peak of your poem is high upto some extent. keep writing.

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Chinedu Dike 13 September 2014

This poem is written in heightened language. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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