Rebirthed Poem by Brook Renwick

Rebirthed

Rating: 5.0


He contemplated his being.
He decided he would try again.
He'd do things differently and
remember his lessons learnt.

He was prepared enough
for this journey where the
experience could be harsh
but also fulfilling by contrast.

He was born into the body of
a baby with honest parents.
As he entered the light he
forgot all of his lessons.

He assured himself that
it would be okay overall.
His life would not be harsh
and he had a guardian.

Sunday, October 3, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: rebirth,birth,reincarnation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Everyone has a spirit guide to help.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2021

Rebirthed and he had a guardian! Exellent!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2021

Excellent thought-provoking poem 5 Stars full. This poem mesmerizes me.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 October 2021

This is an intrigue, imaginative muse on reincarnation sort of. Kudos! Also plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'squash the hate hate bug'

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Brook Renwick

Brook Renwick

Sydney, Australia
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