Seasons Poem by Brooke Renwick

Seasons

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Summer heat is beating me down to the ground,
its fierce radiation melting my skin all around.
Winter's chill isn't chilly from sunrise to sunset,
and I breathe in fresh air that feels clean as it gets.

Autumn and spring are the seasons that shift,
when rivers fade after monsoons or new blossoms lift.
I get things done daily without the whinges
because it's fresh air on which my happiness hinges.

Saturday, November 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,happiness,seasons,spring,summer,sunset,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Australian summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 November 2018

Summertime is the best. A great poem.

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Chinedu Dike 03 November 2018

Well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Brookus.

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Brook Renwick 03 November 2018

Thanks for the positive feedback Chinedu! Have a good one.

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Brooke Renwick

Brooke Renwick

Sydney, Australia
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