Come walk with me in your mind a while,
Relax, unwind, and simply be,
Imagine sitting under a tree,
With dappled light drifting,
Through each leaf,
For you my friend and me,
A blanket of grass,
Offers a comfortable space,
For two friends to simply be,
In this time, space, reality.
There is no right or wrong or work to do
No past or future
Only time to simply be, so nice to be free.
I've been busy finding me
It's a journey I must do
To the best of my ability
You have been busy finding you
It's a journey you must do
To the best of your ability
I know God is with us
On our separate journeys
In recovery.
Just for today
I send a smile and a hug your way
To let you know
I think of you now and then
Of the time I had a good friend
Come visit me under that tree
In a place of tranquility.
A powerful friendly start. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Beautiful poem. Rich flow of thought, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Gillian.
walk with me in your mind a while, For you my friend and me, friends to simply be, I send a smile and a hug your way time, space, reality. busy finding you Come visit me under that tree In a place of tranquility. These are the points i collected after carefully reading your poem.. you have wonderful imagination and you express what comes to your mind very well Serene poetry…….. very fine expressions of simple love Genuine love, simplicity, enjoying the nature together and living in eachother in the mind. Like your poem very much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Outstanding poem. A friend indeed!