Red Poem by vaibhav shah

Red

Rating: 4.0


My eyes are Red, my cheeks are Red
From top to the bottom I am Red
My nerves are Red, my passions are Red
There is something that makes me Red

Red is the night, Red is the light
Wherever I see Red is the sight
Extreme is the height, Red is the kite
Hatred of my Red has turned into favorite

I feel you Red, I touch you Red
I hug you and kiss you oh my Red
Your every shade do make me glad
I love you so much my soul is Red.

31-3-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lola Hi 27 July 2009

i read so much poems in that site but yours is my favourite.the red is my favourite coulour.nice10+

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Deepti Agarwal 22 April 2008

Oh My God! ! ! ! this is sooo RED.... a good try... :)

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David Desantis 10 April 2008

And your poem is red too. Great job my friend, very nice read.

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Indira Babbellapati 01 April 2008

red stands for energy...may u continue to hv abundant energies of the creative sort...lv n cheer

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Abha Sharma 31 March 2008

Your RED is of cupid and not of the Devil.. Your flash of red is stimulant, hot and passionate, Red has given your poem Speed, confidence and strength. Your poem’s soul is vibrant with red…well done Mr. Red…

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vaibhav shah

Dungarpur (Rajasthan)
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