Red Alert! Poem by Babatunde Aremu

Red Alert!

Rating: 4.5


She is a beauty to behold
Like a masquerade on display
She is wrapped with attractive garment
Her Arabian perfume oozes out ceaselessly
Her jewelleries shine like oriental sunlight
The eyeballs glitter like a refined diamond
Her skin is as a succulent tomato fruit
She is damned too attractive
Beware she is a compost
Decorated with fresh green grass

She locates herself in thick darkness
Down at the street corners
Her wares are displayed for stray dogs
Like a hunter on expedition
She pounces on her preys
Like Delilah she bewithces
Making strong men to genuflect
Dragging them into abyss
Let all be at alert
Because she a red alert

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David L. Hatton 26 December 2013

The poem pulls you in for the reading, then gives the lesson of Proverbs 7 about the seductress in a contemporary way. Some minor grammatical problems, but not a problem for the message.

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Neela Nath Das 15 September 2012

It seems I'm reading the poem of Coleridge.Willing suspension of disbelief...

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K.ayodeji Abeeb 14 September 2012

very great poem! I dont mean to presume to know but are are u describing a 'fine lady' in the poem?

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