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Changed Destiny

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Nature orderly sets the sky
Empowering sun as day king
And moon takes charge of nights
Stars are ordained as rays
All bringing joy to the world.

Alas! man came on board
Diluted light with darkness
Christened black as white
Turned the destiny of okro seed
Into a distasteful gall.

Man created his own world
Cololured the natural peace
With total confusion
Setting brothers against each other
Bringing bloodbaths and hues
Into once peaceful world
Friday, May 11, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny
Prabir Gayen 31 December 2018
Very beautiful poem..class poem....thanks
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Babatunde Aremu 23 November 2018
Thanks for your comment
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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2018
A fine portrayal of fascinating nature juxtaposed by the rot created by man with his mindless ways. Great poem.Thanks& Congrats, Baba. The poem goes into MyPoemList.
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Babatunde Aremu 23 November 2018
Thanks for your comment.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 November 2018
The power of deceitful human se, though unsuccessfully, being bent on changing the destiny of universe, though unsuccessfully, has been depicted in a melodious verse. Congrats on the poem of the Day.
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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2018
A poignant rendition elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Babatunde and do remain enriched.
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benjamin c. uy 16 November 2018
nature orderly sets the sky, empowering sun as day king, great poetry, great words
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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2018
A thought provoking poem, Congrats for the honours POTD....10
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Matthew Holloway 16 November 2018
you used some well placed imagery here, well written
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Tom Allport 16 November 2018
A poem of truth? Everything changes except us! .....well penned Babatunde
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2018
Moon takes charge of the night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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