Changed Destiny Poem by Babatunde Aremu
Changed Destiny
Nature orderly sets the sky
Empowering sun as day king
And moon takes charge of nights
Stars are ordained as rays
All bringing joy to the world.
Alas! man came on board
Diluted light with darkness
Christened black as white
Turned the destiny of okro seed
Into a distasteful gall.
Man created his own world
Cololured the natural peace
With total confusion
Setting brothers against each other
Bringing bloodbaths and hues
Into once peaceful world
Babatunde, such a powerful poem of the day. Congrats for being picked.........10++++++++
So Very True! ! ! ! ! Beautifully! ! ! ! ! And Powerfully Put Too! ! ! ! ! Shame The Damage Man Can Do! ! ! ! ! A Very Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! Thank You So Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ saved
Powerful and meaningful poem that focuses on the flaws of humanity. Congratulations!
awesome write. Congrats. Your last stanza is very true and the most powerful one.It echoes in my mind even after reading twice dear revered Aren't.
A fine portrayal of fascinating nature juxtaposed by the rot created by man with his mindless ways. Great poem.Thanks& Congrats, Baba. The poem goes into MyPoemList.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nicely done. Congrats on poem of the day!