David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Red Face - Poem by David Darbyshire

Red bums
and sweet plums
Blue eye's
and long thighs

Blonde hair
skin so fair
Sweet lips
motherly hips

It's not fare
they all stare
I didn't want to be a gay man
it is just the way I am


Comments about Red Face by David Darbyshire

  • (5/12/2006 7:23:00 AM)


    No clue at first then...... well there it is in black and white.


    Patricia
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  • (5/11/2006 7:22:00 AM)


    David, I liked the way you composed this - giving no hint in the first two stanza's about the narrator's true feelings. Just wondered if the second to last line could be shortened slightly -

    'I didn't want to be gay
    it is just the way I am'

    Only my humble opinion...! Kind regards, Justine
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 11, 2006


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