Red Moon Poem by Ronald Chapman

Red Moon



Is the moon embarrassed?
Why has she turned red?

Could it be,
So many people looking at her this night
Before she falls asleep?

Why has she turned red?

Now! All she wants to do is fade away
and hide before the morning light...

Wednesday, October 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for the October 8,2014 Red Moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stan Petrovich 08 October 2014

The carmine moon has no feelings of its own, as such. We merely feel for it, if it is a would-be Mars. The poem is all right, but too simplistic in a way that calls for more, not fewer, adjectives...and that is rare.

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Zahra Shariat 08 October 2014

too much star_gazers eye up the pretty moon!

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Zahra Shariat 08 October 2014

too much star_gazers eye up the pretty moon! !

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