Friday, July 31, 2009

Red Rock Canyon Picnic Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a lovely place for a picnic
Like climbing very high
Straight through clouds to heaven
So beautiful it could make you cry
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Marilyn Lott
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 August 2009

A wonderful and joyous picnic, complete with astonishing surroundings.Nice writes Marilyn.

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Meggie Gultiano 01 August 2009

i enjoy reading this piece, Marilyn.Seems i was there, too. Beautiful imagery.Love it so much

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Sandra Martyres 31 July 2009

Your Red Rock Canyon Picnic is a lovely poem with very vivid imagery....I would love to visit the place sometime...great write Marilyn

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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