I walk this dusty path, nothing before me but the night.
The sun setting on my left, the moon rising to my right.
The shock of this vast existence takes over my mind.
How can this battle of light and dark be so intertwined?
Such beauty in this sunset, yet proof of the days finality.
While the moon is a reminder of the unknowns totality.
I continue on. My faith in what is true and right shall never waver,
This momentary reflection of my life I will forever savor.
Reflections of extra ordinary thoughts in an emphatic way. 10/10
This is very nice Natasha, I liked it alot and thought you described everything beautifully, really well done.
i loved this piece. i really liked the last 2 lines. once again very nice flow. it didnt seem forced and thats part of what makes your flow very good.
continue on, my faith in what is true and right shall never waver. This momentary reflection of my life I will forever savor. ..........punch lines. Faith.10 plus
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
an ordinary life goes on an easy way. a good write