Regretful Love? Poem by Fay Slimm

Regretful Love?

Rating: 5.0


Love can be abnormally
Unfair, and yet
The wisest among us
Choose not to forget
That doing our best
To achieve goals we set
Means life can be lived
Without deadly regret.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 06 October 2008

It is the only consolation Fay! thanks for reminding me....Tai with no regrets but plenty of strife to show for it

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Mary Rich 23 May 2009

Wow, thanks faye, very nicely put.....reminded me that i dont have to pay for others misgivings only my own....as my mother would say......kudos..kudos. kudos.....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

A non-typical composition on love. Yes, I do agree with your idea. 10+

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Lynda Robson 06 October 2008

Wise words Fay, do not let your heart rule your head comes to mind, 10 Lynda xx

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Tom Balch 06 October 2008

In so few words, the head of the nail.......10/10 Regards Tom

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Mary Rich 06 October 2008

words well spoken.....double kudos....

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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