Rejected Poem by shimon weinroth

Rejected

Rating: 5.0


eyes are dimmed
tears at the heart,
swim to te brim of despair,
air sobs and vents, vexed hopes
choking off the flow and stream,
of chance turned coat,

bitten by natures
little chances
the realm of grasp
just if, and action
cards are stacked

sequentially abused, scream
next not first,
thrown up-land on our feet
turned down- learn of defeat

get up
new winds will blow
new opportunities
will show

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 09 November 2008

a little sad though eyes -sobs-tears-and then rejection. but i like the climax 'get up new winds will blow new opportunities will show' excellent AAAAA++++and 10+++ i loved it regards anju

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