Release Yourself, Feel Life Poem by shruti modi

Release Yourself, Feel Life

Rating: 5.0


Each breath, each mistake, each move, each emotion, makes a difference
Every action evokes emotion
Prayer without devotion is like an unmoving stone wall
So, under the starry sky join your hands and pray, pray to believe, to trust, and to accept
Shut your eye and drown into yourself,
Listen to your soul, raving for the satisfaction of living
Look straight into eyes, the innocence will attract a connection with someone
Speak the unsaid, release yourself,
Be worldly but unworldly at the same time
Confused? This confusion would never stop…confusion is just a part to cure yourself
Listen to you head and not always to your heart
You’ll find life so simple and breathable

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

I love this poem! ! ! ! Giving you a 10 for sure.

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Colton Hicks 15 July 2008

I absolutely love this! Great poem.. keep writing.

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Coach Roth 27 July 2008

Much thought packed into this one...and it flows nicely....Coach

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Sivan P.G Menon 27 July 2008

shruti.. the fact that you are emotive..thoughtful..itself shows your inner temperament to express... you have an urge to write...efffortlessly...i't s a....gift... keep writing...you will have reasons to be..joyful.. regards.. sivan

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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

Sometimes its really nice to release all your feelings and leave all the things for heaven sake and feel free by searching and feeling the life..........very solid poem indeed......10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 15 September 2008

This is really beautiful. So wonderful and simple.

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

age is no binding if you are really living not just existing witnessed this in ur poem!

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Aryana West 29 July 2008

This is my favorite one of your poems. Its like a window into your heart. Beautiful, very beautiful. =D ~Ary

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Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

'Confused? This confusion would never stop…confusion is just a part to cure yourself' I like this line, i find it true It shows the real you.

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