Remember? Poem by Linda Ori

Remember?

Rating: 5.0


Do you not remember me
The one who set your feelings free
And brought you to your knees...............

Do you not recall the days
You threw away your careless ways
And lost your heart to me....................

Do you not relive those nights
Of wild abandon - timeless flights
Into a magic place...............................

Where I was all you needed then
Oh, surely you remember when
The world was ours alone....................

The magic still remains with me
It hurts to know that you don't see
How much those moments meant............

In quiet times I hope you know
Deep in your heart I loved you so..............
And maybe shead a tear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 28 February 2007

Strong emotional content combined with an incisive asessment of what this love meant and clearly still means. The format suits the crisp making of points and enhances the poetic quality. Great writing Linda. jim xxx

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jack russell 19 February 2007

Time seems to wither many relationships, but memories linger on unhindered. A fine poem, Linda :) Hugz jack :)

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Charles M Moore 16 February 2007

Excellent write Linda, Reminds me of the Stoic philosophy.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 February 2007

Poignance & aesthetic, and another gemstone hath adorned this site, by our effulgent Midnight Muse! fjr

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