On that pleasant spring morning,
when the birds are out and performing
and the sun's rays are warming
...
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I like it and will 'favor' it. But I wonder if you used 'whittle away' where 'while away' fits better. Hmm. I don't recall hearing of 'whittle away' before today. bri ;)
On that raw winter twilight when the sun is inching out of sight and you're ready to call it a night Remember me beautiful. wishes, desires intense. Remember me. thank you dear poet. tony
I now give it four stars, and several stares as well. : ) bri