Friday, December 14, 2012

Remember Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

On that pleasant spring morning,
when the birds are out and performing
and the sun's rays are warming
...
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Charles Hancock
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Bri Edwards 26 July 2022

I now give it four stars, and several stares as well. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 24 July 2022

I like it and will 'favor' it. But I wonder if you used 'whittle away' where 'while away' fits better. Hmm. I don't recall hearing of 'whittle away' before today. bri ;)

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 February 2016

On that raw winter twilight when the sun is inching out of sight and you're ready to call it a night Remember me beautiful. wishes, desires intense. Remember me. thank you dear poet. tony

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A lovely poem and it is beautiful....

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Valerie Dohren 14 December 2012

A lovely poem, very poignant.

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Damian Leonard 14 December 2012

Great poem mate, nice work!

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