On that pleasant spring morning,
when the birds are out and performing
and the sun's rays are warming
Remember me
On that sultry summer night
after the thunderstorm yielded its might
and the moon is revealing a little light
Remember me
On that crisp autumn day
when you have time to whittle away
and the leaves are an intense color buffet
Remember me
On that raw winter twilight
when the sun is inching out of sight
and you're ready to call it a night
Remember me
I like it and will 'favor' it. But I wonder if you used 'whittle away' where 'while away' fits better. Hmm. I don't recall hearing of 'whittle away' before today. bri ;)
On that raw winter twilight when the sun is inching out of sight and you're ready to call it a night Remember me beautiful. wishes, desires intense. Remember me. thank you dear poet. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem mate, nice work!