Fatima Obaid

Bronze Star - 2,088 Points (19 Dec / Rawalpindi)

Remembering -A Difficult Task - Poem by Fatima Obaid

I don't like her
she once came
and took my dear friend
oh I am missing my friend
I don't like her
she once came
and took my love's pettiest soul
oh I am unable to forget that soul
I do hate her
she once came
and took my cheering people
Oh I want them back
she always comes so sudden as a dark
and takes away so early the prettiest spark
I don't wanna miss them, I want death
the only thing I face day by day is
to remember those gone forever

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Form: ABC


Comments about Remembering -A Difficult Task by Fatima Obaid

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/13/2015 1:26:00 AM)


    No death in love.. I like it.. the term death is a wrong nomenclature.. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/5/2015 10:48:00 AM)


    Nice poem with nice lines...I don't wanna miss them, I want death
    the only thing I face day by day is
    to remember those gone forever
    I invite u to read my poems.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015



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