Reminiscing A Day When..... Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Reminiscing A Day When.....

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It was a day, full of all usual
but with some sort of difference
Day broke out, in a hazy mode
Sun, hesitantly peeped above skyline
letting its gleam milder than usual
Ocean, the mighty, held her waves
rolling, but with some austerity
Wind being kinder to all befallen
blew across observing quietness
It was a dawn, a dawn of anonymity
All, it seemed to witness one thing,
A mother's hearty smile on her lips
Gleaming in golden rays, so sweet
over a melody of an infant's first cry
when she gifted, yet again
another bundle of love
Aruna, (the dawn) to our domain
on the Twenty ninth, March

Reminiscing A Day When.....
Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,birthday,family life,birth
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Quietness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 30 March 2019

Thank you Robert for the comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2019

Usual perspectives of love and life we see whole day. Some differences too we notice. Sun hesitantly pees on skyline and wonderful rays dance there. Austerity is performed by nature. Mighty ocean waves the beauty and love. Sweet cry carries bundle of love. A great imagery is drawn in this excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing this with us...10

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Thank you Kumar, for your encouraging comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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