Hello All POEM HUNTERS POETS
Conscious subconscious poetry
Yours is a FIRST CLASS ANALYSIS
but to me
when I compose artificial poetry
I laugh often
but when I compose poetry
out of the Blue
I don't know how it comes to me
out of experience
or out of memory
a past episode an occurrence maybe
desire love or detest could be
consciously one composes forced poetry
just to rhyme it
subconsciously we can't say anything
as the mind is half awake
half asleep
past occurrences perhaps manifest
in the synapses of their own recall
Freud only endeavoured to resolve
How much to believe him
can anyone tell me
subconsciously now I am half awake
PLUME
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful extempore poem indeed. Thanks for sharing such a piece of work.
All my poetry is EXTEMPORE ONLY I rarely edit till guys pull me then also may be thanks Jazib Kamalvi janabh ji ur a poet really