Response To A Great Poem About Spiders Poem by Stevie Taite

Response To A Great Poem About Spiders



I read a poem called ‘spider month'
It portrayed the fear, and was a triumph
In reply I wrote this poem below
(The poet was V. Doherty, so you know)

I also dread that time of year
But thankful for the flies they clear

I wish they'd hide, stay out of sight
Not scurry 'cross the boards at night

A movement in periphery
Makes heart rate rise immediately

I'm quick to make my feet retract
For fear of them is not an act

Perhaps we shouldn't be so hard
On keeper of the fly graveyard

I have one up upon a shelf
I never see him, he is stealth

I often have to use a Hoover
Just as a dead fly remover

He kills the wasps, he's that hardcore
As creatures, I hate them much more

As long as he stays out if sight
To let him live? I think I might! X x

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Loved your poem Val! X x x I still find them hard to kill directly. It's a glass and beer mat for me, or the Hoover if its handy! But not for Boris the shelf spider! He is spared for his elusiveness! X
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Hughes 11 August 2016

I like it. See my 'Percy the Pigeon' for another often ill regarded creature.

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Ruby Honeytip 22 January 2013

I think I like spiders a little more after reading this: -) Not the big hairy monster ones we get here though! Just the little ones lol xxx

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Alla Simone 02 November 2012

Truly imaginative. A clever and playful enjoyable read. I admire your ability to create pieces like this. A movement in periphery Makes heart rate rise immediately Perhaps we shouldn't be so hard On keeper of the fly graveyard Those are my favorite lines. Thanks for sharing.

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John Brown 29 October 2012

Hi Stevie. John Entwistle (Bass player with The Who) wrote a good song called Boris The Spider. Have you ever heard it?

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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