Retired Husband, Tired Wife Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Retired Husband, Tired Wife

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When a man retires from working life,
That's when a full-time job gets his wife.
The job of a day's time
Rewarding rare a dime,
And as perks— life on edge rife with strife!
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When I wrote this I wondered why it took me15 long years to pen a small ditty like this. But it is hard on men to confess truth. I'm sure all suffering spouses must be feeling somewhat like this. Yet, to be fair on me, I get all along solid firing from the new boss— much more than I might have received all of working career.
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Tongue-in-cheek | 01.05.15 |

Wednesday, April 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,husband,work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 21 April 2019

Though written in a humorous vein, this is an absolute truth...... an eternal presence in the house to boss over! A beautiful limerick! A sure 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 April 2019

Many thanks indeed, Valsa George, but most of limericks are like that. I fell that they have a great potential to convey serious thoughts as well.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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