Sunday, March 15, 2015

Retrospective Crush Comments

Rating: 4.3

Another man took me out tonight, but his hair was dark.
We made painful small talk in a hotel bar
Before I cut the evening short with an excuse.
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Hannah Everette
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Elaine Sept 16 March 2015

I really enjoyed the narrative here... I could imagine myself feeling the same way.

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Kwai Chee Low 15 March 2015

Poem in retrospection. Nice poem, Hannah; your poem is an example that a good poem need not necessary rhyme.

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Kewayne Wadley 15 March 2015

Beautiful! The element of surprise, love is!

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Kelly Kurt 15 March 2015

Touching. Thanks for sharing.

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