Return Poem by Phil Mason

Return

Rating: 3.5


Are you back?
Seems in a way you are.
I can't see you, I can't touch you,
but you're here
somewhere.
Perhaps you've always been here,
in my thoughts,
In my soul
My heart
My desire

Sunday, October 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 31 October 2016

Is this the same person who vanished in your other poem? Some unkind person has given this poem a rating of 4 out of ten. It is so much better than that! I will give it a ten to compensate, but you can erase all the votes and start over if you want.

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P. Mason 01 November 2016

It is...I'm not that concerned about what others think, I'm the first to admit I have no idea what I'm doing on matters of poetry. But your kind words are appreciated.

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