Thursday, October 15, 2009

Reverberating Breath Comments

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through satiated
darkness spread in the room
a single audible breath
rose and reverberated
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Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2009

From: Richard Jarboe (stockton United States; Male; 60) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 10/24/2009 7: 45: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: reverberating breath our breath mixing with breath of the ocean, we are but a water dropp to the sea. good one.

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Mark Nwagwu 17 October 2009

a voice, in darkness; a pair of hands, stretched out in the silence - the indestructibility of the human person. One person makes so much difference; may we have always this lone person, defying all odds to give us light. Liked this a lot, Indira. a 10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 October 2009

........................ simply awesome! loved it to the core. thank you.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 October 2009

Very impressive imagery Indira. You inspired me to write instantly a poem. Take a look at it.

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