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**[revised 11-19-09] Getting Through October And Beyond

Rating: 3.2

What was it about October
That made us think
Spring would not be coming back?

The weather rattled at us,
Leaves fell,
Leaving us feeling

It's not going to get any better.
No amount of experience or

Logic will helped,
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Louise Kerswell 23 November 2007

Im not sure that really understand the concept of the poem but it is a good one

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Hans Ostrom 05 November 2007

Nicely done-direct and plain-spoken, with a great last line.

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Walter Durk 01 November 2007

Very nicely written Tom, I like this poem. It concisely brings to mind the seasons.

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David Harris 22 October 2007

Tom I like the visual effect that you have shown us here. The imagery is so clear and crisp like October normally is. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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