Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Rhyme Rant On Prose Rants Comments

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RHYME RANT ON PROSE RANTS
Prose which with capitals would rant
against pet hate, for favoured cause
is often filled with fatal flaws,
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Jonathan ROBIN
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Sidi Mahtrow 05 December 2007

Rhyme's the thing That you bring To the forefront Of the moment When you seek to Dismiss those who Ignore the essence Of the moments And persist in making Thoughts forsaking To appear As you fear That no meaning can be Conveyed such as she (or he) Unless it's in a structure That poetry has for sure. Yet the thought's the thing That will always bring The reader's attention To the moment of contrition So, unless the rhyme Has someting To say, It's needless to play.

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