Rhythm Of The Rain Poem by ANGEL LAYL

Rhythm Of The Rain

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I'm sitting in the window,
Staring at the gloomy sky,
Thinking of nothing,
As time passed by.

Then rain starts falling,
Along with the tears in my face,
Darkness is on my sight,
Avoiding the feelings inside.

Memories starts flowing,
Back from the time of lost,
Everything was stupidity,
For not thinking what's the cost.

As the thunder roared,
And some leaves were mearly blown,
As the sharp lightning strikes the sky,
You left me broken-hearted, hoping to die.

A single season of joy and laughter,
Living in the ocean of tears,
Everything was a fairy thing,
Leaving me no happy ending.

If this is not the end of oblivion,
Then I have to pretend everyday,
As if my life is going to end,
Trying to be strong on this very day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 29 October 2011

Great thoughts how you write this simile of emotion to rain, nice piece. Read my - Gentle Rain - I like to compose about nature, and love rain.

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Angel Layl 01 August 2011

Thank you... Rain always brings back unwanted memories... So nostalgic...

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No Ones Bidness 31 July 2011

loved the poem it exactly describes the atmosphere when it rains and how it makes you fell BTW love the title

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Hans Vr 31 July 2011

This is very well written. You have a very bright poetic talent. The poem is full of feeling, in almost perfect harmony witht he images used.

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Manila, Philippines
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