Right Place Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Right Place



N o one can judge a person
Without assigning a reason
That comes from deep feeling
That is kind form of telling

No one cn be called fake
As it has some stakes
If you have some reservation
Kindly assess fresh the relation

Man or woman, both are important
That is condition at present
If you believe sincerely
You may love it dearly

Yes this is right place
To express
And feel happiness
On shining face

Let us be one
And think of none
As time may prove
Who was right to move?

Monday, June 9, 2014
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N o one can judge a person Without assigning a reason

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I like the message Michelle Hadley4 minutes ago I like the message, I guess it is just I feel that it is a bit hollow. Let your passion shine through in your work! :)

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:) Broken Lullabies?Less than a minute ago We should never judge anyone because its not our place. I always say that if I judge someone then it's by who they are right then and there. After that they could change in an instance and ask God to forgive them so who would I be to go on judging? Nice work :) Comment +1

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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 7 hrs · Unlike · 1Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! Hasmukh Mehta

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Shujat Ahmad and Les Bush like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Many concepts and depths. Mark Blair1 hour ago This poem speaks volumes. Who is anyone to judge another without first contemplating the judgment of themselves? Why call someone fake? Remember that when you are pointing one finger at another individual. the remainder of your fingers are pointing directly back at you. In my humble opinion this is an accurate expression of what it is like to be human. From justification of judgement being bred from deep seated convictions to experiencing happiness and union. Comment +1

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No judgement Richard Froede53 minutes ago THE eternal question...

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Both genders are needed Hanky Panky4 minutes ago to love and cherish our existence. Nice Job Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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