Stevie Taite

Rookie - 318 Points (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Riptide - Poem by Stevie Taite

The layers of comment
fall on top
Like in the making of
sedimentary rock
And fossilised
amongst opinions
are thanks for support
In this dominion

The layers of words
whether many or few
Will recycle our eyes
to Poets new
So we can deposit
some thought of ours
Big apologies if it takes
more than hours

Hey where are the poems
in this analogy
They are the beautiful
deep blue Sea
That laps and swirls
with riptides of emotions
We take pleasure in swimming
in the poetic ocean!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A fun analogy to turn into a poem of appreciation for all who show their souls and share their ideas and inspirations through their poetry on this site.

Comments about Riptide by Stevie Taite

  • (2/16/2013 8:21:00 AM)

    Oh, how we all love to be loved! LOL (Report) Reply

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  • (2/16/2013 8:21:00 AM)

    Oh, how we all love to be loved! LOL (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/31/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    A lovely poem Stevie, a nice thought with which I fully concur. (Report) Reply

  • (1/27/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    Thanks for the appreciation for all our fellow poets through this magnificent - Riptide. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 26, 2013

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