Risk Of Losing Peace Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Risk Of Losing Peace

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I have lost it somewhere during the long journeys,
When thinking of one or more incidents and agonies,
I might have let someone to steal it from me,
I might have been careless to lose it to a snatcher,
Knowing the long arrogant nails adorn the fingers,
My heart had been kept too near to scratch and tear,
When the things were placed too high to reach,
I wore the ignorant efforts of high heels without any research,
Involved with unknown territorial business in red water,
I have lost it somewhere and don't know how it occurred,
Once it's happened, it is very hard to bear and solve,
Losing it will not be a choice, we will lose it to resolve,
The blunders that we have made and it may take many months,
And years. The hearts without peace create havoc,
The mind without peace is a place for hell's makeshift block.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Sinclair 27 October 2012

So touching, , , i understand this write fully, my favourite line is I wore the ignorant efforts of high heels without any research, ...oh the recklessness of youth....i also love how the final word block more than stops this write to a finality.. fullstop... tyvm karer

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