Rolling Your Own Poem by Marilyn Lott

Rolling Your Own

Rating: 5.0


The trails of yesterday
Were rugged and extremely long
Those folks had to be brave
Resilient and strong

The saddle bag sufficient
For just a short time
They’d better have a plan
Perhaps a town they’d find

Of course wagon trains
Took families to the west
Many tough roads to cover
But they had a definite quest

But they made it for the most part
Established newfound land
Their names on a piece of paper
Their liberation was so grand

They didn’t have the markets
To buy whatever they’d need
But there were, of course, places
To buy food and a bag of seeds

They rolled their own cigarettes
So different from nowadays
Hard times for certain
Back in the olden days!

Saturday, May 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: cigarettes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

Beautiful portrait on old timers' life...well composed piece, Marilyn...rhythm over rhyme all through! 10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 09 May 2009

reminiscing golden past terrific poem

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Fiona Davidson 09 May 2009

Stunning piece Marilyn...really full of images....Fi....10+++

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Catrina Heart 09 May 2009

Stunning poetic language used here...well penned...fine diction and rhymes...10

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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