Roof Of My Patience Leaks Comments
For which season can I in hope now wait?
When even rains find no room in his mind,
Though memories flood river-like in spate,
On what can I sustain, what support find?
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But season peaks, roof of your patience leaks! Observing rainy day and monsoon you have nicely penned this interesting poem. An amazing sharing is done.10
Thank you kumarmani Mahakul, it is nice to get your feedback, but do point out to me whenever i've slipped,
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1/15/2026 9:59:20 PM # 1.0.0
A very well crafted poem in sonnet form about love and the effects of the rainy season. Well done.
In a large country like India rains have special significance in most parts. A rainy day is looked as an opposite of a sunny day. Thanks for your feedback, George Krokos.