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Rotating Eyes

Rating: 5.0

I was trying to mend
my mutilated poems without you.
Sometimes a nimble hand hurts.

When you cheat on the
truth. I knew you were not made of
same element like me.

Age has caught up with
my pains. I cannot revolt against

true love. Beauty is always cruel.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 August 2021

Beautiful expression! Thoroughly poetic...top score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Your Poem is A Beautiful Creation, Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Beauty is never cruel, Sir, Beauty is always Most Beautiful and sits in our hearts

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Excellent poem, most deserving as The Member Powem Of The Day, Sir! 5 Stars full for this beautiful verse about beauty

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Chinedu Dike 12 August 2021

Exquisitely expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful creation...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 August 2021

Age has caught up with my pains. I cannot revolt against true love...that's true sir except the last line! Congrats! !

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