Rowing Boat Comments
A two-some sailed across the ocean,
Their boat never still in good motion,
Not sure if they were rowing,
Or only but quarrelling,
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twosome: " a pair of people considered together" " Their boat never still in good motion, " i'd put a comma after " still" , IF, by " still" , you mean " quiet/motionless" , and don't mean " continuing" . It's NOT a good idea to start out over an ocean under such conditions; a small pond or swimming pool is what i'd advise.
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1/15/2026 9:55:17 PM # 1.0.0
Dear Bri, I see your point, but 'still' is not used here in that sense. But I do agree it confuses. 'But their boat never in good motion' would have been better. Your feedback is always welcome. Sorry, I'm responding so late.