Rubaiyat - Fighting Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Fighting Love

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In my agony and your ecstasy of love.
Who is winning the battle we seldom care?
Life arena becomes the battlefield with tug of war
Whichever side the rope gets pulled, war is on again.

Sunday, October 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 14 October 2015

You are right, my final exam was going on. It just ended this week. Loved reading your beautiful pieces of art, and missed some these days.

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2015

Thanks much......My best wishes to you for ever and ever till.......

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Sanjukta Nag 14 October 2015

Everything is fair in love and war. and when the war is about love there is no harm then.

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Ruslan Agaev 12 October 2015

Man, I love it, I wish I could write rubaiyat myself(going to learn how to write them) , thank you!

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2015

Thanks much and my best wishes for you and looking forward to review your Rubaiyat..........

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 October 2015

Verily, a lovely cause and effect of a tug of war.

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2015

Tug of war between the ecstasy of love on one side and agony of love on the other, is an amazing imagery. This is a painful situation. One only hopes that love prevails on either side of the rope and a ceasefire is enforced. Thanks for sharing the poem M. Asim ji.

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