Rudraksha - I To V Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Rudraksha - I To V

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I

I submit before thee my Lord
This sacred bead of Rudraksha
That I carried everywhere with me
With all it's devotional sanctity

II

My pleasure is immense to surrender before thee
Everything that counts belonging to me
And to beg of you for my daily needs
What a bliss to get alms from thy hands!

III

Like the cool virgin waters of a forest stream
To a parched bird from the heart of desert
Let thy love gush into my yeaming soul
And calm down the burning resentment

IV

Hail me to thy sublime domination
Freeing me from the desolate rock prison
Which stands amid soaring ocean waves
That break into fathoming desperation

V

Rescue me from this gambling house
Where I went gaming tempted by the shills
Every time I loose I am enticed to the next for a gain
Unaware of my wallet being dwindled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reetha Antony 12 September 2019

Great attempt....congrats

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Thank you very much Retha

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Ramadas 30 August 2019

The poet carries these chants a chain made of rudraksha beads under his lips to everywhere he goes! ! He submits before the Almighty with atmost devotion and acknowledges His sublime domination and supremacy! ! Good opening!

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Thank you very much Ramadas. As I believe in the supremacy of God I carry with me Sublime thoughts about him everywhere I go

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I submit before thee my Lord This sacred bead of Rudraksha That I carried everywhere with me With all it's devotional sanctity A wonderful Series that i look forward to read with much interest and enthusiasm.......10

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Gratefully acknowledge your comments. Looking forward for your appraisal and suggestions about the other pieces

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VIJAYA 14 July 2019

Beautiful devotional prayer, like the beads of Rudraksha

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Thank you Vijaya for the positive comments

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Prathibha Dp 24 January 2019

The poet helps us find he real meaning of prayer through this poem. Like each beads in rudraksha, the poet, through each stanza, is helping us take a step closer to god.Thanks for writing.May the count of beads never end...

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Thank you Prathibha. When the very purpose of writing this poem has been felt served the satisfaction of the writer really grows beyond the limits

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