Ruined Heart Poem by Wali Jamali

Ruined Heart

Rating: 5.0


Love like things
stretched haphazardly over the years
receded into vicissitudes of life.

Grown like a plum fruit
untouched
untasted
rotten into an ugly heap.

It told a different story
of unfulfilled promises
of love
withered hopes
and untouched heavens.

Like a marvellous annecdote
of ancient ruins..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 08 November 2009

Indeed excellent. Finish is fantastic: Like a marvelous anecdote // of ancient ruins.. Ten+ dr.sakti

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R. Ariffin 19 October 2009

Of love thats ruined yet still stands. Beautifully done.

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