Wali Jamali

Rookie (1981 / Karachi)

Renewal Of Pledge - Poem by Wali Jamali

You may have memories
Of our last meeting at River Indus.
standing on the west bank,
I held your hand
And kissed it softly.

You asked, ' how deep is your love? '
I said, ' Not deepr than this sacred river! '
You shouted, ' how this could be? '
I nodded, ' yes, it's true.'

I have renewed
My pledge of love with it.
You know, it was there,
Much before you.

Comments about Renewal Of Pledge by Wali Jamali

  • (12/28/2008 11:52:00 AM)

    I don't know Indus but your words draw the picture of the Indus and your deep love... (Report) Reply

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  • Sadiqullah Khan (12/7/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    Those who have seen indus will understand the ebauty of this poem, , nice thought, ,10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2008 10:52:00 PM)

    So you can never love me the way you love your brother Tom? ? Only thing that I remember was standing by Floss while he held my hand and everything before that is dark to me! ! ! [Mill on the Floss]

    Murky manna of Sindhu
    maligned yet lusted after

    Tnnx Ms Jamali
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/20/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    the vows by the river bank......holy and sacred...........pierce the heart...........good work (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 2:50:00 AM)

    Ouch! That is something a girl in love doesn't want to hear.
    I get the spiritual beauty of the poem though.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 6, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 6, 2008

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