* Sachet Of My Dreams Poem by Faran Khalid

* Sachet Of My Dreams

Rating: 3.2


I am ready to peel off
The seal
Of my childhood
Sachet of dreams.
Time has arrived
To sail through
The seas of productivity,
To knit the
Jersey of success
Knocking at my doors
With the wool
Of struggles
And shine in life
That juggles.






(7-13 - 09)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 20 July 2009

Very pensive thoughts illuminated with simli not very much common. The adeptness can lead us towards the fullfilment of our dreams. Well portrayed the pre-productive era of life..

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Mehreen Mujeeb 15 July 2009

beautiful imagery. perfectly composed.

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Surya . 15 July 2009

a beautiful naration.well composed voted10 surya

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~ Jon London ~ 15 July 2009

Life can seem a struggle, and most often is....but it's the game we each play until our passing day...................well penned bro..........keep up the good work

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