Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Sad And Forlorn Whil'st Stranded In La La Land. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught in La La land without a ride...
Can leave one inert as if inside a pool of cement.
The sadness that arises fro' this situation can keep one mentally tied...
Are we drowning in our own pool of sadness and depression?
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Francesca Johnson 24 August 2006

Another great poem, Michael. I like the way it skips haphazardly, matching the subject matter - in my opinion, it was put together thoughtfully. Made great reading. Love, Fran xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

SIR MICHAEL JEFFREY...Another MJG Spetacular...BTW: Congrats on your return to the TOP 500 POETS LIST. Well deserved achievement, MJG....Like this piece much....You da man, my friend! ''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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