Sad Love Poem by Thabani Khumalo

Sad Love



I spiral down before the one I love
For there are many but bounds between us.
Though she stands where she can smell my breath
She can not see me suffocate and die in desire.
So I take a daily Dragon fix to roast my brain and lungs
To end my life abruptly for i can't compete with god.
The love I am trying to gain is the money he is willing to pay.

Monday, December 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 28 December 2015

I can hear the sadness through the lines like violin that cry by its tune on the vibrating wires ...a heartfelt write Thabani

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Thabani Khumalo 31 December 2015

it is comments like these that might just inspire me to write outside my sphere of thinking. these lines are super awesome! thank you for the comment.

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