Poet of the River

Rookie - 10 Points (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

Said Goodbye~ (Sad) - Poem by Poet of the River

I'd die a thousand deaths,
If I thought you would even care.
I'd show up every day,
If I thought you would be there.
I'd give the world to you,
If I thought you would feel the same.
I'd wait a million years,
Even if you never came.
I'd always say nice things to you,
If I thought you would hear what I say.
Even now I would give my life,
If you were ever to go away.
Life ends in strife...
You left my side today.
And today, took my life.


Comments about Said Goodbye~ (Sad) by Poet of the River

  • (5/24/2012 9:10:00 AM)


    Part of us dies when someone is lost, and another person awakens like a phoenix from the ashes, it’s always painful to lose someone but it happens, sad reality of life. Sad and bitter but a good write (Report) Reply

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  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma (5/19/2012 8:08:00 PM)


    Vey nice poem...expressing the sadness and grief of eternity.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 19, 2012


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