Samay Comments

Wow sirji...... It seemed that pen was alcoholic......... Mein to pita nhi meri kalam manti nhi...... Mein to jita nhi meri kalam Marti nhi........ Mere aansu sukh gye meri kalam roti nhi..... Kaisey bayan krun sath mera aur meri kalam ka..... Mera samay nikal gaya Sara, meri kalam ki saam bhi hoti nhi... - - - My tribute to your pen sir

A beautiful poem....loved it.....thank you for sharing :)

A touching poem on cruelty of time, very impressive.

[...]aaj bahak le phir ek bar, isse pehle ke chor samay, bachi khuchi poonji ko apni, cheene auor le jaye, [...] Carpe diem in poetic best! Urdu labzon ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai Akhtar ji. Iss kavita to par ke laga jaise ke maikhane me baithe hue hai hum, aur har ek shabd dil ko chu ti gaayi. Bohoot, bohoot sukhriya isse humse baat ne ke liye.