Same Compartment Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Same Compartment

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Same compartment
Saturday,29th September 2018

Yes, we are co-passengers
and travel further
with full bags and baggage
and successfully manage

what do we find in common?
simple soul with human feelings
trying to do better things
and do something new

it was definitely the quest
but doing for self and others also best
we wept for agony and pain
and always maintained the human chain

so it is in the good harmonious atmosphere
that we live without fear
and share
the happiness

if you were good
you shall be remembered
if you were only to the self
you shall be confined to the close shelf

Hasmukh amathalal mehta

Same Compartment
Saturday, September 29, 2018
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2018

Emmanuel Mettles Emmanuel Mettles Very thoughtful 1 Manage Like · Reply · 2h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2018

Sumanpriya Sikka In this journey of life everyone gets off at different station, Some people's presence, you hardly notice but some people leave a lasting impression. That lasting impression is of humility, Which opens the doors of humanity. ************* Beautiful and inspirational write! 1 Manage Like · Reply · 3h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2018

welcome shiju h 1 Manage Like · Reply · 3m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2018

Shiju H. PallithazhethShiju H. Absolutely brilliant and well penned Hasmukh 👏👏👏👌👌✍️✍️❤️❤️ 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1h

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